itch.io

*Spoiler Alert*

I really really really love this book its so good but there's one thing I picked up on that I really wasn't a fan of. We got all this buildup about the mad god and it lowkey feels really intense, but then he turns out to be this sweet caring guy, and while I really like his personality, it feels very anti-climatic. Like it would've been cool if you wrote it that he was completely mad and really dangerous one minute (like he was when we first met him in the clearing) and the next moment he's this nice guy (like Nathan) who just happens to be the only person alive that can save MC. Idk if you've read The Poppy War by RF Kuang but I feel like it would've been so much better if he was written a little bit like Suni. That's just my two cents tho

100% my favv vn so far and I've read lots. This was so cute while still not coming across as cringe/cliche. Thank you so much for blessing me with this!

So this is like a year later lol but I stole the potion, and all I got was a strength boost? I dunno if this feature was removed somewhere down the line?

This is such a good story oms please keep it up! One thing I have noticed - I can only see a relationship bar for Saria, Ori and Leon. I'm not sure if this is intentional? But otherwise this is an amazingg story ty so much for blessing me with this.

Here's a screenshot:

Ya its epic i really loved it. In the beginning when i was reading it i remember thinking the writing was a little weird (like almost forced) but it quickly got better. Usually when i read books like these i quickly decide on one RO but all of them had captivating aspects here. Just one thing: yk the guy who is like crazyyy in love with helios (i forgot his name but dont feel like going back through the story and checking)? When you have the option to flirt with him it's really forced. Cuz i mean youve never met him and all of a sudden you love him? Maybe js add like a small scene where you meet him earlier in the book. (Like a playday before Luceris comes to kidnap you.) But otherwise great game I really miss it.

Ik ik ppl are busy and stuff and i understand if u have your own life or u abandoned the story for some reason but pretty pls can you just let us know if ur done with this story?

Ok thank you

ok thanks so much!

So i have a question and can someone who knows twine well maybe help me? So I desperately want to write my own IF (this story partly inspired me cuz its so good i love it btw) but i cant figure out how to make a character creator/customizor (eye colour, gender etc). Is there like a turorial i can use? I looked for one but couldnt find one. 

So i have a question right. I was reading this (epic story btw i love it so much) and it inspired me to write my own story on Twine. I have a story idea and everything and I watched a couple of twine tutorials because i have no coding knowledge, but i can't figure out how to do a character creator (like eye colour, skin tone, hair colour, gender etc.) How did you do it? Is there like a tutorial i could maybe use? Pls i need help I'm obsessing over this story and I NEED to write my own in which hunter doesnt friendzone me

No Android?

Sorry if I caused a hassle. I  don't have Twitter so I didn't realise. Sometimes I forget other people have lives too. Sorry!

@atmac, you ok? I've been checking my itch.io almost bi-daily for half a year now, and your last post was over 90 days ago. Sorry if I'm being strange, I'm just worried. After all, this is the first, and best, VN I've ever read. I'm starting to worry something happened (like you got cancer or smth.) Good job on the VN and hope to see more soon. 

Amazing! I was hooked from the start, from OC's innocent character to Lyall's rough looks and attitude, I love it! I can't wait to see more of this superb novel, and I'm excited to see how it ends